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elisa : Mirror On Femininity

On Femininity

Posted on Dec 29th, 2007 by elisa : Mirror elisa
Yours
an opinion
made a pickle of
fickle women dressing for the ball
furs and jaded
the twinkling of faux gems
Auburns and sables
much sought after tresses
coveted
twisting bodies, ensnared
clothed
encircled
by wafting
her sensuous perfumes
to be hidden in
going to the play
Dramas
drawn out
melancholies, sweet agonies, what shames
are hidden in blind eyes
in yours
irrevocable decisions
once, and only remaining to be
opinions

--elisa
Access_public Access: Public 3 Comments Print Send views (123)  
about 2 hours later
Danny said

My lovely wild bird!
unto the beautiful touch-me-not flower
she flew
with her beatiful lovely feathers
she hop
…………… look out for more soon.

Doug : Back Yard Artist
4 months later
Doug said

A lovely insiders view. In third grade I made friends with Janet because Janet was Mindy's best friend and Mindy was my version of desire fulfilled. Guess I was looking for the insiders view but the gap never closed on the mystery?
For if it did, if it does, desire moves to the town next door.

Little Big O : Luminous Mischieviousness
6 months later
Little Big O said

Danny and Doug,

You're answers are THE HIT!  especially this “the gap never closed on the mystery?
For if it did, if it does, desire moves to the town next door.”

Thank you!

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elisa : Mirror Posted on December 29, 2007
by elisa

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